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#1 2014-01-29 13:14:38

snis
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From: Stockholm, Sweden
Registered: 2010-06-02
Posts: 7

First edit, what have I missed?

Hello,

I have made my first article in Arch Wiki today.

https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Gateone

Does it look OK to you, is there anything I have missed?

regards,
Snis

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#2 2014-01-30 03:29:57

kynikos
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Registered: 2010-12-28
Posts: 158

Re: First edit, what have I missed?

It looks like a good job, however there are some minor improvements you can make:
* python2-futures seems to be in the AUR, not in the official repos
* The article is what is called an "orphan" one, i.e. it's not linked from any other, you may want to check if there are related articles that can link there
* Command boxes like:

cd /etc/gateone/conf.d
sudo vi 10server.conf

can be simplified to e.g.:

# vi /etc/gateone/conf.d/10server.conf

Note the replacement of sudo with the # prompt, as recommended in https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/He … _line_text
* https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/He … operations recommends to link to the systemd article instead of giving systemctl examples like in the Configuration section
* Compliance with https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/He … unctuation could be improved

Hope this helps

EDIT: Even better, the file editing commands should be generalized in accordance with https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/He … g_requests

Last edited by kynikos (2014-01-30 04:16:44)

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#3 2014-01-30 11:45:28

snis
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From: Stockholm, Sweden
Registered: 2010-06-02
Posts: 7

Re: First edit, what have I missed?

@kynikos, thanks for your input.

I have now edited the article. For the better I hope wink

Last edited by snis (2014-01-30 13:16:08)

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#4 2014-01-31 16:07:46

kynikos
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Registered: 2010-12-28
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Re: First edit, what have I missed?

Well done, thank you for contributing to our wiki!

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#5 2014-01-31 21:43:25

snis
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From: Stockholm, Sweden
Registered: 2010-06-02
Posts: 7

Re: First edit, what have I missed?

Thank you for your support!! ...and edit.

I should from here on try to make notes of all issues I head encounter that can't be resolved by the Great Arch Wiki, so that I can make more contributions.
However I often tend to solve the issues in unrecommended ways wink

Last edited by snis (2014-01-31 21:44:06)

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