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#1 2012-02-16 22:24:31

yasar11732
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[SOLVED]Can someone check my language.

Hi,

I added the warning in here; https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Ud … SB_devices , but I am not sure if it sounds funny, because I am not a native English speaker. Can someone check?

Last edited by yasar11732 (2012-02-20 16:41:07)


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#2 2012-02-16 22:26:21

jasonwryan
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Re: [SOLVED]Can someone check my language.

Looks pretty good to me. You might want to use "might prevent fsck from running..."


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#3 2012-02-16 22:28:46

yasar11732
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Re: [SOLVED]Can someone check my language.

Done. Thanks.


Yo Dawg, I heard you likes patches, so I have created a patch for your patch, so you can patch your patches before you patch.

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#4 2012-02-17 04:49:20

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Re: [SOLVED]Can someone check my language.

yasar11732 wrote:

Done. Thanks.

Thank  you.


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#5 2012-02-17 18:01:03

karol
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Re: [SOLVED]Can someone check my language.

A small tip: you can link to the diff, so that we can see what did you add/change, like this: https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php?ti … did=184998
In this case, there's only one warning there, so it's clear what did you add.



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