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#1 2012-02-19 01:13:14

demizer
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From: Santa Clara
Registered: 2010-03-03
Posts: 110
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Rewrite "Installing on btrfs root"

See: https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/In … Btrfs_root

Hey guys and gals, I did my first large contribution to the Arch Wiki. As this is my first article contribution, I need people to critique my work. Basically, did I do it right?

Things you should take a closer look at:
* Are there too many warnings/notes
* Is it necessary to mark sections as unconfirmed?
* A lot of the syslinux stuff is out of date and I don't want to learn syslinux to fix it.

The reasons for the rewrite are noted in the discussion of the article. 

Thanks!

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#2 2012-02-20 14:42:47

kynikos
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Registered: 2010-12-28
Posts: 161

Re: Rewrite "Installing on btrfs root"

I just did a very quick review of your work (comparing it with the old revision), it looks a good improvement of the article! However I didn't test anything, just to make it clear.

I've just fixed some notes/warnings/tips and used Template:Accuracy to mark unconfirmed sections, as a warning is not suited for that purpose.

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#3 2012-02-20 17:03:34

demizer
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From: Santa Clara
Registered: 2010-03-03
Posts: 110
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Re: Rewrite "Installing on btrfs root"

Thank you!

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#4 2012-02-20 17:10:44

ewaller
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From: Pasadena, CA
Registered: 2009-07-13
Posts: 13,826

Re: Rewrite "Installing on btrfs root"

demizer wrote:

Thank you!

Thank you.


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