[WIKI] Someone proof-read this article please?

fukawi2 · 2009-03-17 05:39:00

I've almost completely rewritten this article since it had an 'out of date' notice on it and I'm about to go through the process that the article describes. Can someone please proof-read it for anything glaringly obvious that I've boo-boo'ed?
http://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Con … em_to_RAID

abesto · 2009-03-17 06:18:00

I can't comment on the contents, but I fixed some typos and removed unnecessary spaces. One word I couldn't work out is "meeing" in "because it's meeing half the array!".

fukawi2 · 2009-03-17 21:23:37

Whoops.. "Missing"

Thanks abesto

japetto · 2009-04-15 13:48:21

I changed a couple of instances of "loosing" to "losing".

R00KIE · 2009-04-16 19:36:55

"I suggest you drop to single user mode before you start by using the init 1 command. "

I'm not even close to an expert (never fiddled with raid arrays actually) but wouldn't it be better to do that from a livecd or liveusb if possible? No risk of data changing in the middle of the process then. If that is possible then it should read something like:

"I suggest you drop to single user mode before you start by using the init 1 command. Preferably you should do this using a livecd or a liveusb to ensure no data changes during the process".

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#1 2009-03-17 05:39:00

[WIKI] Someone proof-read this article please?

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